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Monday, May 13, 2019

Ocean Poem

for the past 2 weeks I have been learning to put more descriptive words in my writing with a background that connects with our writing
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  1. AnonymousMay 13, 2019 at 10:46 AM

    Hi lucas,I like how you have included descriptive words.
    Nice job on creating your own background.
    Check puncuation and capital letters.
    Samara

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  2. AnonymousMay 14, 2019 at 9:11 AM

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