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Hi lucas s, amzing descriptive language I like how you have included what it smells like feels like and tastes like, remember for next time to reread the writing to make sure it makes sense
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Hi lucas s, amzing descriptive language
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Hello Lucas, I enjoyed reading your description of the watermelon
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