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Monday, March 25, 2019

My Watermelon

My watermelon


My watermelon tastes like sweet scrumptious pineapple
It looks like a green zebra
it sounds like a tree being cut down
it feels as smooth as a metal pole

My watermelon

2 comments:

  1. Hi lucas s, amzing descriptive language
    I like how you have included what it smells like feels like and tastes like, remember for next time to reread the writing to make sure it makes sense

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  2. Hello Lucas, I enjoyed reading your description of the watermelon

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