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Hello, Lucas. I'm intrigued by your poem, as it requires tons of descriptive language. Next time I think you could add a more detailed picture. (??) Are the scientific sentences you used actually facts? Goodbye. ー Emerald
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great picture maybe you could write a poem about Egypt.
ReplyDeleteHello, Lucas.
ReplyDeleteI'm intrigued by your poem, as it requires tons of descriptive language.
Next time I think you could add a more detailed picture. (??)
Are the scientific sentences you used actually facts?
Goodbye.
ー Emerald